The ambivalence of the speaker in your writing-- half savoring, half appalled. Overall effect is of a kind of dare, but I don't know who's being challenged, the reader or the one singing. Just a fleeting impression.
please don't read any of that as criticism. Trying to describe my experience of an energizing tension--- I find myself getting invested in the fate of this intelligence that seems a little wary of its own lucidity.
Like an echo of angels. Just beautiful Mayday 🖤
Thank you very much, Jenny :)
The ambivalence of the speaker in your writing-- half savoring, half appalled. Overall effect is of a kind of dare, but I don't know who's being challenged, the reader or the one singing. Just a fleeting impression.
please don't read any of that as criticism. Trying to describe my experience of an energizing tension--- I find myself getting invested in the fate of this intelligence that seems a little wary of its own lucidity.
I didn't, don't worry! I appreciate your comments, Rich!
Sweet! Lovely voice, too!
Thank you so much, Carole!