To capture the lives of three, no four characters in a short, sharp-cutting piece is very good writing. My imagination expanded each paragraph, each line, each thought to novel length, and left me pondering the volume of information presented. That is to capture life in its gory beauty.
To capture the lives of three, no four characters in a short, sharp-cutting piece is very good writing. My imagination expanded each paragraph, each line, each thought to novel length, and left me pondering the volume of information presented. That is to capture life in its gory beauty.
Thank you so much for your kind comment, Carl! I’m so glad you enjoyed it ;)
This is excellent work. It feels raw
Thank you so much, Keith!
there is so much emotion in this, amazing
Thank you very much, petrichor :)